The drafts:
We followed right convnetions and looked at audience feedback, and created the drafts of our digipak. We analaysed the possitives and negatives of each draft in order to improve and have a better end product for digipak.
Possitives of draft 1:
- Artist representation was clear
- All the images complimented each other
- Most details were visible
What needed to be improved draft 1:
- All very text based, not other essential info
- simple layout, needed to make better use of space
Possitives:
- Changed the colour filter to make it look more urban.
- Good font.
- Back cover - good positioning of layout, images and texts.
- Front cover - text looks too small and doesn't stand out.
- Still some key information missing.
Possitives:
- Happy with what we produced, so people from our target audience had a look at it and gave possitive feedback.
- The key information that was missing had been included.
- Typography had changed and the colour of the typography changed.
For our final product we needed to complete our final digipak which we had done by improving sand working on the drafts of our digipak. The impoving process enabled us to have a more conventional digipak, which was essential in the overall production of our music video work.
Onat, you can see that the group has worked hard in drafting your digipak. There are three good digipaks that you include and they have been discussed well and critically.
ReplyDeleteTo improve;
-label each draft so it is clearer to follow
-I know you were having issues with sizing, try and do this one last time and let me know if you are still unable to crop the background out